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06-25-2018, 01:53 AM

Hey Allison,
Thanks for the feedback. I haven't thought about this one in a while, so I appreciate some of what you said because it got me thinking about how to edit this piece. The courage part might be where I focus when I get around to editing.

Thanks again,
Richard

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Second Edit: Ordinary - by Richard - 03-07-2018, 10:23 PM

RE: Ordinary - by Tiger the Lion - 03-08-2018, 12:59 AM

RE: Ordinary - by Richard - 03-08-2018, 09:08 AM

RE: First Edit: Ordinary - by Knot - 03-09-2018, 03:14 AM

RE: First Edit: Ordinary - by Richard - 03-09-2018, 12:25 PM

RE: First Edit: Ordinary - by FP123 - 03-11-2018, 04:09 PM

RE: First Edit: Ordinary - by Richard - 03-12-2018, 09:33 PM

RE: First Edit: Ordinary - by Suzruth - 04-02-2018, 01:58 AM

RE: First Edit: Ordinary - by Richard - 04-02-2018, 08:51 AM

RE: First Edit: Ordinary - by danny_ - 04-03-2018, 11:26 PM

RE: First Edit: Ordinary - by Richard - 04-08-2018, 09:42 AM

RE: First Edit: Ordinary - by danny_ - 04-08-2018, 01:45 PM

RE: First Edit: Ordinary - by allisonkreid - 06-24-2018, 09:21 PM

RE: First Edit: Ordinary - by Richard - 06-25-2018, 01:53 AM

RE: Second Edit: Ordinary - by Richard - 06-26-2018, 09:27 AM

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