Thinker (revision 2)

Thinker (revision 2)

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06-25-2018, 12:03 AM

Thank you for the feedback. The 'stretched it overhead' line was intended to intimate a pullover sweater. I see an opportunity here to make the analogy a bit clearer and also use some more vivid descriptive words. I will play around with it.
Thanks again!

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Thinker (revision 2) - by allisonkreid - 06-24-2018, 08:54 PM

RE: Thinker - by dukealien - 06-24-2018, 10:56 PM

RE: Thinker - by allisonkreid - 06-24-2018, 11:05 PM

RE: Thinker - by rowens - 06-24-2018, 11:48 PM

RE: Thinker - by allisonkreid - 06-25-2018, 12:03 AM

RE: Thinker - by rowens - 06-25-2018, 12:10 AM

RE: Thinker (revision 1) - by Knot - 06-25-2018, 10:01 PM

RE: Thinker (revision 1) - by rowens - 06-25-2018, 11:41 PM

RE: Thinker (revision 1) - by allisonkreid - 06-26-2018, 01:35 AM

RE: Thinker (revision 1) - by rowens - 06-26-2018, 03:00 AM

RE: Thinker (revision 2) - by Richard - 06-27-2018, 11:46 AM

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