Thinker (revision 2)

Thinker (revision 2)

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06-24-2018, 11:05 PM

Thank you for the feedback. I definitely need to play with the tone, as my meaning was not contempt... More so a plain observation of a person who wears their heart on their sleeve... Or in this case their poetry scribbled napkin as a sweater.

The gender was androgenous on purpose, as I did not view it relevant to the charecterization.
Thanks again!

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Thinker (revision 2) - by allisonkreid - 06-24-2018, 08:54 PM

RE: Thinker - by dukealien - 06-24-2018, 10:56 PM

RE: Thinker - by allisonkreid - 06-24-2018, 11:05 PM

RE: Thinker - by rowens - 06-24-2018, 11:48 PM

RE: Thinker - by allisonkreid - 06-25-2018, 12:03 AM

RE: Thinker - by rowens - 06-25-2018, 12:10 AM

RE: Thinker (revision 1) - by Knot - 06-25-2018, 10:01 PM

RE: Thinker (revision 1) - by rowens - 06-25-2018, 11:41 PM

RE: Thinker (revision 1) - by allisonkreid - 06-26-2018, 01:35 AM

RE: Thinker (revision 1) - by rowens - 06-26-2018, 03:00 AM

RE: Thinker (revision 2) - by Richard - 06-27-2018, 11:46 AM

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