Bird
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(06-20-2018, 08:30 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  Bird

It's always one of these
perennial Tuesday afternoons

when the sky boasts
an unpaintable blue

and the clouds catwalk by
in their god-faced caricatures of you

that makes a bird of me.
Might be an idea to start at “Tuesday”, though the last line will also have to change to reflect the new sentence structure
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Bird - by Tiger the Lion - 06-20-2018, 08:30 AM
RE: Bird - by dukealien - 06-20-2018, 10:37 PM
RE: Bird - by busker - 06-24-2018, 12:20 AM
RE: Bird - by cloud - 11-16-2018, 06:13 AM



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