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#10

06-13-2018, 05:09 PM

I think this poem could work as a song, honestly. It has some striking imagery and the subject matter is something we can all relate to. The only thing I would fix is the use of capital words, this might throw some readers off. Other than that, good job!

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Lost - by SpaceDirt - 04-29-2018, 09:42 AM

RE: Lost - by alonso ramoran - 04-29-2018, 10:46 AM

RE: Lost - by Scarlet69 - 05-19-2018, 09:36 PM

RE: Lost - by TheCoyote - 05-25-2018, 10:37 AM

RE: Lost - by Radetof.Yahska - 05-29-2018, 06:36 PM

RE: Lost - by SpaceDirt - 05-30-2018, 09:46 AM

RE: Lost - by nozaki - 05-30-2018, 10:07 PM

RE: Lost - by wapiti - 06-07-2018, 12:32 AM

RE: Lost - by Mayhap - 06-13-2018, 02:19 AM

RE: Lost - by wordgobbler - 06-13-2018, 05:09 PM

RE: Lost - by Jackintheroom - 06-24-2018, 04:38 AM

RE: Lost - by The Sinn - 08-20-2018, 12:46 AM

RE: Lost - by Shokna - 09-03-2018, 02:36 AM

RE: Lost - by billy - 09-24-2018, 09:42 AM

RE: Lost - by applebear - 09-27-2018, 05:45 AM

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