06-09-2018, 08:05 AM
(06-07-2018, 01:39 AM)wapiti Wrote: The blindfold of lonelinessThis is really fully fleshed and a very nice poem! I feel that are thing and themes you could expand on such as the "blindfold of loneliness Swept away on a June night". I find myself wanting to know more and see more images. Though it is great the poem is short and sweet. Anyways wanted to post and say that this one made my day thanks for the story!
Swept away on a June night
Our young and trusting eyes met
Love an unspoken whisper
Three springs turned yellow autumns
Memories made as leaves fell,
Our lives and dreams became one
Whisper transformed to a shout
Passion, summer’s fruit we feast
Lives entwine like vines this night
Our families become one
The shout now a sacred vow
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
--mark twain
Bunx

