A Good Fall
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Falling in love was good
suprisingly
loving the fall was better

Knowing now
what I didn't then
was that she turned out to be half man
beneath the equator
and so my fall prevented
a confrontation
with that one-eyed stranger



The seasonal disparity is good, as is the gender and sexuality.  Geography and physiology. But that's me assuming things; that you mean equator in more than one way, that the person lived in another place. Fall meaning three main things, falling in love, fall the climatic season, a fall as the failure of the relationship. That's what I think about it.
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A Good Fall - by Rave - 02-09-2018, 09:10 PM
RE: A Good Fall - by kaos - 04-13-2018, 10:46 PM
RE: A Good Fall - by Knot - 04-14-2018, 01:12 AM
RE: A Good Fall - by danny_ - 04-19-2018, 12:56 AM
RE: A Good Fall - by CodyMarsh - 06-02-2018, 12:38 PM
RE: A Good Fall - by Richard - 06-04-2018, 02:18 AM
RE: A Good Fall - by rowens - 06-04-2018, 04:17 AM
RE: A Good Fall - by rowens - 06-04-2018, 07:00 AM
RE: A Good Fall - by allisonkreid - 06-24-2018, 09:46 AM



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