05-22-2018, 11:34 PM
A rythmic dance of a betrothed belly dancer with a touch of magic thrown in, whats not like ? the meter needs tightening in quite a few places but the end rhymes work nicley and the whole poem girates along at good pace, a good post in Fun, well done. Bets Keith
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out