First Edit: Natural Temptation

[Ryan_w_r]

I feel I need to preface my comments by saying I don’t know what I’m talking about.. but, I truly enjoyed this. I felt sadness and burden in this piece. Not a burden you weren’t willing to bare but acknowledgement of something not being right but you will carry on regardless. It feels like being in a relationship with someone that struggles with depression. Again.. I’m a dummy but a dummy that you made feel something. Thank you.