First Edit: Natural Temptation

First Edit: Natural Temptation

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05-10-2018, 01:04 PM

Hey Todd and Knot,
Thanks for the feedback. It seems like the feelings I was hoping to express here came through. I just need to give some of the wording and line structure some thought, which I definitely will. You both gave me things to think about when I do an edit of this piece.

Greatly appreciated,
Richard

Time is the best editor.

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First Edit: Natural Temptation - by Richard - 05-09-2018, 09:50 PM

RE: Natural Temptation - by Todd - 05-10-2018, 12:18 AM

RE: Natural Temptation - by Knot - 05-10-2018, 12:41 AM

RE: Natural Temptation - by Richard - 05-10-2018, 01:04 PM

RE: Natural Temptation - by Ryan_w_r - 05-16-2018, 06:35 AM

RE: Natural Temptation - by Richard - 05-16-2018, 11:34 AM

RE: First Edit: Natural Temptation - by Richard - 05-18-2018, 12:21 PM

RE: First Edit: Natural Temptation - by Knot - 05-19-2018, 04:02 AM

RE: First Edit: Natural Temptation - by Richard - 05-19-2018, 11:02 AM

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