At dusk

At dusk

kenzlee_poetry
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#12

04-24-2018, 02:48 PM

Hi there!
Short and sweet poem. I would consider shortening it even more to keep the original shortness of the poem. For example, "At dusk, leaves bending. Fading away..." It is a little vague and could be explained in greater detail...expand!!

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At dusk - by bogpan - 12-05-2017, 09:57 PM

RE: At dusk - by Mopkins - 12-05-2017, 11:07 PM

RE: At dusk - by vagabond - 12-05-2017, 11:19 PM

RE: At dusk - by bogpan - 12-06-2017, 04:08 AM

RE: At dusk - by vagabond - 12-06-2017, 05:04 AM

RE: At dusk - by Mopkins - 12-06-2017, 06:16 AM

RE: At dusk - by nibbed - 12-06-2017, 08:34 AM

RE: At dusk - by bogpan - 12-07-2017, 05:16 AM

RE: At dusk - by nibbed - 12-08-2017, 04:17 PM

RE: At dusk - by moot - 02-26-2018, 02:44 AM

RE: At dusk - by Lorvick - 03-08-2018, 11:06 AM

RE: At dusk - by kenzlee_poetry - 04-24-2018, 02:48 PM

RE: At dusk - by moanlisa - 06-24-2018, 09:55 AM

RE: At dusk - by piggate - 07-17-2018, 05:49 AM

RE: At dusk - by Fae - 08-15-2018, 09:37 AM

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