04-20-2018, 04:32 AM
RiverNotch,
Thanks so much for your suggestions! I agree, it does need some editing. I don't really like the long sentence with just colors either, and I've been trying to come up with something different. I often get called out for being too repetitive; I need to work on that, lol. Thanks again!
Thanks so much for your suggestions! I agree, it does need some editing. I don't really like the long sentence with just colors either, and I've been trying to come up with something different. I often get called out for being too repetitive; I need to work on that, lol. Thanks again!