NaPM April 18, 2018
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Hearst Expires


Once they shone yellow, bright
with sharp nattering and flare of life—
chirping, pooping where they lived,
all opinion, saffron sparks in lamplight.
Now, canaries in a coal mine
they’ve gone gray, cracked voices
harsh amid loud pointless picks
and grate of shovels, cursing
miners who have lost their way:
they warn, false old-line journals
that freedom dies in darkness
but instead cough bile and die
to lie in pretended loyalty
unnoticed as the air goes empty.

Oops - quick edit, metaphor, not simile!
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NaPM April 18, 2018 - by Todd - 04-18-2018, 01:05 PM
RE: NaPM April 18, 2018 - by Knot - 04-19-2018, 12:17 AM
RE: NaPM April 18, 2018 - by Keith - 04-19-2018, 04:52 AM
RE: NaPM April 18, 2018 - by dukealien - 04-19-2018, 05:34 AM
RE: NaPM April 18, 2018 - by Tiger the Lion - 04-19-2018, 06:29 AM
RE: NaPM April 18, 2018 - by Richard - 04-19-2018, 07:23 AM
RE: NaPM April 18, 2018 - by cloud - 04-19-2018, 12:27 PM
RE: NaPM April 18, 2018 - by just mercedes - 04-19-2018, 03:57 PM
RE: NaPM April 18, 2018 - by RiverNotch - 04-19-2018, 10:57 PM
RE: NaPM April 18, 2018 - by vagabond - 04-25-2018, 02:09 AM
RE: NaPM April 18, 2018 - by Todd - 04-26-2018, 06:21 AM



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