04-15-2018, 12:31 PM
(04-15-2018, 07:15 AM)dukealien Wrote: Aroint Thee, Slick!I like this Duke. You took something ordinary and made me realize it could be quite frightening.
You’ll laugh, I know,
but more than death
I’m scared of ice.
Having rolled one car
and wrecked another on it—
that, and periodic pratfalls—
when I feel my vehicle’s rear end
begin to wander, or a foot
to slip, those memories
roll roiling in, my bowels begin
to liquify. So ice, betrayer
of assumptions, let me by!
(04-15-2018, 09:49 AM)Lizzie Wrote:Thanks Lizzie. Romero's "Dawn of the Dead" was all about this type of symbolism, so I just fleshed it out here (pun intended).(04-15-2018, 04:29 AM)Richard Wrote: Romero's LegacyWith a couple of concrete elements -- shoes, purses, phones, etc. -- this is a nice observation. Never thought of that symbolism before.
We're supposed to be the zombies in the mall,
our craving for flesh the lust for material goods,
Time is the best editor.

