04-15-2018, 04:17 AM
Hey cloud, I don't think you should be too hard on yourself. This is all good for practice and growing as writers. Besides that, it wasn't bad what you posted. I've been busy, but also a little reluctant to post anything as I also tend to look pretty critically at everything I write. It's probably a good thing, up to a point. But you had the courage to post anyway, and I think I'll go ahead and try myself as well.
After all,
when you're high up on the lake's windy cliff-side
staring down at the little boat and deep blue-green,
somebody has to be the first
to jump.
(I don't know where that came from except a memory that popped into my head. Maybe I'll go write about it.) Cheers mate!
After all,
when you're high up on the lake's windy cliff-side
staring down at the little boat and deep blue-green,
somebody has to be the first
to jump.
(I don't know where that came from except a memory that popped into my head. Maybe I'll go write about it.) Cheers mate!
"The best way out is always through."-Robert Frost
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