A Good Fall

[Knot]

Hi Rave.

A Good Fall

Falling in love was good
surprisingly
loving the fall was better
(works well on its own)

Knowing now
what I didn't then
was that she turned out to be half man
this should probably be;
was that she was half (a) man
beneath the equator
and so my fall prevented
I think you might consider
an alternative to 'fall'
a confrontation
with that one-eyed stranger

Not sure there's enough here,
but, nonetheless, I found it
oddly sad.


Thanks for the read.


Regards, Knot.