04-13-2018, 10:46 PM
Really good stuff. Since the poem is short i wont bother going line by line, but my favorite parts were A- Loving the fall, B- One eyed stranger (a vagina euphemism?). The premise could be elaborated upon of course, but that is a question of intention and not criticism.
It seems to me to be about an encounter with a transgendered woman or maybe a woman who dominates like a man or something along those lines. But still..good stuff!
It seems to me to be about an encounter with a transgendered woman or maybe a woman who dominates like a man or something along those lines. But still..good stuff!