Edit 3: On Actias

[danny_]

I see. Without that spoiler I fear many will trip there. Even with it, the dual meaning and its wording still don't sit quite right with me. It's certainly your poem and there's nothing wrong with keeping a small portion abstract. One suggestion: change to "elusive to" or "elusive for". The "of" makes it even less clear for me. Let me know if you would like any more advice on that line, but otherwise the picture of this poem and methods used were pretty inspiring for me.