03-29-2018, 01:20 PM
Is this about you (of poem) trying to be serious and other person just warm and playful? I do like the last couple lines in any case. I just personally see one person with a serious expression and the other pulling up a teddy and pushing it on you.
"Attempts to be solid" ... as in emotionally?
If I'm on the right track let me know, then I could definitely add some suggestions, otherwise I'm truly lost.
Hope to assist with this once I get a better grasp of the goal. PM if you don't want to spell it all out publicly.
"Attempts to be solid" ... as in emotionally?
If I'm on the right track let me know, then I could definitely add some suggestions, otherwise I'm truly lost.
Hope to assist with this once I get a better grasp of the goal. PM if you don't want to spell it all out publicly.
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