03-22-2018, 05:50 PM
@ ellz483
Thank you for taking the time to go through this, I really appreciate the help. I am encouraged by your comments and will take them into an edit. The dilemma you have given me is how the N is being perceived, you have got him perfectly, a bit of an arsehole who’s angry at everything. The problem you give me is that you don’t feel a connection to the poem because of this. Really appreciate the feedback. Keith
Thank you for taking the time to go through this, I really appreciate the help. I am encouraged by your comments and will take them into an edit. The dilemma you have given me is how the N is being perceived, you have got him perfectly, a bit of an arsehole who’s angry at everything. The problem you give me is that you don’t feel a connection to the poem because of this. Really appreciate the feedback. Keith
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