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just a moment
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03-22-2018, 07:18 AM
XD well i think they all did good on telling you what needs fixed. Me im just gonna tell you what I liked. I saw it as a memory and a beautiful one at that. The kind you wanna hold on to forever but as we all know you can't. I think you portrayed this wonderfully what its like to live in a moment yet only for a moment. Thank you so much for your beautiful poem can i ask what inspired it?
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just a moment - by FP123 - 03-13-2018, 03:34 PM
RE: inspiration - by 20_Hamilton_18 - 03-13-2018, 06:30 PM
RE: inspiration - by FP123 - 03-13-2018, 07:09 PM
RE: just a moment - by Todd - 03-13-2018, 10:43 PM
RE: just a moment - by Richard - 03-14-2018, 02:04 AM
RE: just a moment - by FP123 - 03-14-2018, 01:35 PM
RE: just a moment - by UselessBlueprint - 03-15-2018, 03:21 AM
RE: just a moment - by Fatman Butter - 03-21-2018, 02:22 PM
RE: just a moment - by HersheyKiss - 03-22-2018, 07:18 AM
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