03-21-2018, 06:32 PM
Nice one Paul, the ending is great.
My only query would be about 'March' in the title, is it simply a month reference or is it a play on the double meaning of 'march', if so then a 'march' feels at odds against the race that you have set up in the poem.
I'm out of practice with all this critique
Mark
My only query would be about 'March' in the title, is it simply a month reference or is it a play on the double meaning of 'march', if so then a 'march' feels at odds against the race that you have set up in the poem.
I'm out of practice with all this critique
Mark
wae aye man ye radgie