First Edit: To The Person I Used To Be
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Hey

While not knocked out by this, it does strike as decent work. One thing that scratched at me on my 2 reads is that I felt it should read "must I apologize" Rather than "I must apologize"
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RE: To The Person I Used To Be - by Leanne - 02-25-2018, 05:42 AM
RE: To The Person I Used To Be - by Richard - 02-25-2018, 05:54 AM
RE: To The Person I Used To Be - by Richard - 02-26-2018, 03:19 AM
RE: First Edit: To The Person I Used To Be - by Fatman Butter - 03-21-2018, 02:03 PM



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