First Edit: To The Person I Used To Be

First Edit: To The Person I Used To Be

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03-21-2018, 02:03 PM

Hey

While not knocked out by this, it does strike as decent work. One thing that scratched at me on my 2 reads is that I felt it should read "must I apologize" Rather than "I must apologize"

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First Edit: To The Person I Used To Be - by Richard - 02-25-2018, 05:33 AM

RE: To The Person I Used To Be - by Leanne - 02-25-2018, 05:42 AM

RE: To The Person I Used To Be - by Richard - 02-25-2018, 05:54 AM

RE: To The Person I Used To Be - by 20_Hamilton_18 - 02-26-2018, 01:10 AM

RE: To The Person I Used To Be - by Richard - 02-26-2018, 03:19 AM

RE: First Edit: To The Person I Used To Be - by Richard - 03-01-2018, 12:24 PM

RE: First Edit: To The Person I Used To Be - by Fatman Butter - 03-21-2018, 02:03 PM

RE: First Edit: To The Person I Used To Be - by Richard - 03-24-2018, 08:08 AM

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