just a moment

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of this
you can be clear
that moment
was
a moment (S1 is very weak. Line breaks are excessive. Very little information gathered from this)

I saw it
in the distance

I saw it
as it came closer

I saw it
as I lived it (This portion here, also very weak. I'd cross out the second two "I saw it"s and remove line breaks)

I can see it
fading
out of sight
as I shade my eyes
to look ahead
into the blazing sun (You have a real image here, but I don't gain much information from it. You're relating a real image to an ambiguous idea. Fading / Blazing disagree, one of these words must be changed so you can make the idea a little more solid.)

(X)that moment

what a moment

I saw it

now
it’s gone (Everything from X to here adds nothing. I suggest cutting it.)

Looking to what others wrote, I generally agree with their points. I'm not going to point out cliches for now, but I've annotated what I can. Unfortunately there just isn't enough to dive too deep. Not in terms of length (it's far longer than needed), but it lacks subject matter.