At dusk

[Lorvick]

At dusk
the leaves are bending.

They are fading away.
The light they are closing.

Under the ground
I won't be.

I am really trying hard to fully understand your poem. I do not understand what you mean by "the leaves are bending", maybe use a different word, or add a bit more context. I think overall the poem may need a bit more context to it, I am still failing to see the overall concept or point you are trying to convey. I hope that my comment has been useful.