Second Edit: Ordinary

Second Edit: Ordinary

Richard Offline

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03-08-2018, 09:08 AM

Hey Paul,
Thanks for the feedback. I think a lot of what you said helps tighten this piece up.

Thanks again,
Richard

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Second Edit: Ordinary - by Richard - 03-07-2018, 10:23 PM

RE: Ordinary - by Tiger the Lion - 03-08-2018, 12:59 AM

RE: Ordinary - by Richard - 03-08-2018, 09:08 AM

RE: First Edit: Ordinary - by Knot - 03-09-2018, 03:14 AM

RE: First Edit: Ordinary - by Suzruth - 04-02-2018, 01:58 AM

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