03-06-2018, 11:59 AM
Tanka:
cloud shadows huddle
uphill ahead of the storm -
dry under the trees
the first rain drop bounces up
spinning a world made of dust
Do not try at home
without adult. Super. Vision
may be granted to the blind
miraculously, but we children still try
without adults up, 'Ervis!'; I, on
my pedestal, proclaim: 'It means
without. Adults lack ervis. That's why
they say 'Do not try.'
cloud shadows huddle
uphill ahead of the storm -
dry under the trees
the first rain drop bounces up
spinning a world made of dust
Do not try at home
without adult. Super. Vision
may be granted to the blind
miraculously, but we children still try
without adults up, 'Ervis!'; I, on
my pedestal, proclaim: 'It means
without. Adults lack ervis. That's why
they say 'Do not try.'
