Flash Challenge
#7
Tanka:

cloud shadows huddle
uphill ahead of the storm -
dry under the trees

the first rain drop bounces up
spinning a world made of dust



Do not try at home


without adult. Super. Vision
may be granted to the blind
miraculously, but we children still try
without adults up, 'Ervis!'; I, on
my pedestal, proclaim: 'It means
without. Adults lack ervis. That's why
they say 'Do not try.'
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Flash Challenge - by Keith - 03-06-2018, 07:30 AM
RE: Flash Challenge - by Todd - 03-06-2018, 08:28 AM
RE: Flash Challenge - by Todd - 03-06-2018, 08:35 AM
RE: Flash Challenge - by vagabond - 03-06-2018, 09:42 AM
RE: Flash Challenge - by dukealien - 03-06-2018, 09:58 AM
RE: Flash Challenge - by rayheinrich - 03-06-2018, 10:35 AM
RE: Flash Challenge - by just mercedes - 03-06-2018, 11:59 AM
RE: Flash Challenge - by RiverNotch - 03-07-2018, 01:44 AM
RE: Flash Challenge - by Keith - 03-07-2018, 09:02 AM



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