03-01-2018, 01:00 AM
(02-28-2018, 10:20 PM)vagabond Wrote:I'd forget the sparrow grass...it won't forget you...phew!!!(02-28-2018, 09:32 PM)tectak Wrote:"aspirine" is a spelling mistake(02-28-2018, 08:40 PM)ellajam Wrote: The perfect response to a comment elsewhere that there are things that just cannot become poems. Well done....oh...I don't know...let's not be hasty. Wot is aspirine?![]()
i thought it could be written like that in english, which makes no sense with it being a brand name, but it was late, and that "work" definitely was hasty.. just a half-baked experiment, prompted by your dialogue about shopping list poems.
(02-28-2018, 09:35 PM)Quixilated Wrote: I love how, with nine ingredients, you managed to tell a story. I’m sure there is more than one way to read the story they tell, but I see the story of the first date: nerves and self-doubt with the slim-fast, frugality with the ketchup, anticipation with the candles and wine, plan B with the whisky (in case things don’t go well). I thoroughly enjoyed it.it first had wanted something like cotrim or miconazole after aspirin (but i was too shy to use it)


