Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5)
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Hey Todd, I liked what you did with the ending. The extra emphasis placed on, "will be nothing like this" by your spacing change is completely justified.

Cheers,
Richard
Time is the best editor.
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Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5) - by Todd - 10-19-2017, 06:48 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 12:14 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by Knot - 10-20-2017, 01:01 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 02:39 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 03:06 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision) - by Knot - 10-20-2017, 03:27 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 03:59 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 05:54 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 2) - by Keith - 10-20-2017, 07:44 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 09:26 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 3) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 02:09 PM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 3) - by Knot - 10-20-2017, 09:52 PM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 3) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 10:46 PM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 4) - by Knot - 10-20-2017, 11:45 PM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 4) - by Todd - 10-21-2017, 12:52 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 4) - by Todd - 10-21-2017, 01:26 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 4) - by Todd - 10-21-2017, 01:58 PM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5) - by Todd - 02-23-2018, 07:08 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5) - by Richard - 02-27-2018, 08:48 AM
RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5) - by Todd - 03-01-2018, 06:11 AM



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