Lumps in the Mousse
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Thanks for the notes. Very, very, very tiny edit posted, one that only changed the punctuation on the one line lauraelizdok dinged.

On lauraelizdok's other notes:
The last line of the first stanza (I hope obviously) refers to the title, and since I really like bathos, I'm not quite convinced I should change that sixth line (yet).

On nibbed's question:
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Lumps in the Mousse - by RiverNotch - 02-20-2018, 01:11 PM
RE: Lumps in the Mousse - by lauraelizdok - 02-20-2018, 05:33 PM
RE: Lumps in the Mousse - by nibbed - 02-22-2018, 12:43 AM
RE: Lumps in the Mousse - by tectak - 03-05-2018, 02:08 AM
RE: Lumps in the Mousse - by RiverNotch - 02-26-2018, 01:02 AM
RE: Lumps in the Mousse - by abinuku - 03-23-2018, 02:55 AM



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