Da's Gone Grey like Ma
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Hey Knot,

Glad to make your acquaintance, thank you so much for both your time and your feedback, really good shout re opening this with Ma, I have a propensity to dislike the scissors when it comes to my writing but have actually cut the majority of the initial opening with a revision. Father Ted reference was indeed intentional, I'm not a fan of comedic poetry but I do like to have a bit of humour in my work where I can.

Boys a dear is a strange piece of terminology in the North of Ireland it's pretty much us saying "oh dear", "shit" , etc, etc.

Anyway thank you for the time again and I've already been able to use some of it to help improve this

Johnny

P.S. Leanne I always have a craving for Potato Bread but for some reason I can never quite make it like my Mother does and I think it would be a weird thing for me to ask her to send in the post. Oh well
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Messages In This Thread
Da's Gone Grey like Ma - by 20_Hamilton_18 - 02-24-2018, 07:04 AM
RE: Belfast/York/Cambridge/Sheffield - by Leanne - 02-24-2018, 07:28 AM
RE: Belfast/York/Cambridge/Sheffield - by Knot - 02-25-2018, 04:37 AM
RE: Belfast/York/Cambridge/Sheffield - by Leanne - 02-25-2018, 04:39 AM
RE: Da's Gone Grey like Ma - by Leanne - 02-25-2018, 05:52 AM
RE: Da's Gone Grey like Ma - by 20_Hamilton_18 - 02-25-2018, 05:54 AM



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