Lumps in the Mousse

[nibbed]

Lumps in the Mousse                                      Great title, a catcher.


God added the black too quick                           is black a metaphor?
or failed to stir correctly.                                     the speaker is confused
Most bits flow smooth,
some get stuck in the past.                                 these two lines are great.

(too many funerals this year,
too many failures this month)                              i like how these bits swirl around, separate

He needs the blender                                          
with the long blades.                                            i love this right here! hahahaha
I need another pack of cream,
a white girl who knows how to dance.                  great two-line metaphor



hahaha I like this little poem.
Speaks a lot to me.
It sparkles in given personality.
It also reminded me of my mom's proud cream-of-wheat.
She was challenged, even to make a simple dish on most days.
She made it once with lumps, and felt defeated. Tears welled up.
But I loved the lumps and told her so.
Her cream of wheat was never bad.

-nibbed