Living / Dying

[lauraelizdok]

Mechanisms engaged
ready
loaded
the dark liquid
you isn’t it  - this is difficult to understand, is something missing? Even with punctuation, I'm finding this line hard to follow
you that told me to
never accept
from a stranger?


I decided that I no longer have a stomach for propriety
or sweet and sour candy, you - like the continuing imagery in reference to candy (following on from 'never accept from a stranger')
go fuck yourself
lovely and tell me - A colloquial 'lovey' in place of lovely may add a little pizazz to this line following from the punchy go fuck yourself?
it makes me better