02-14-2018, 05:13 AM
Hi DiamondTom24,
Thanks! I see what you mean regarding the name introduction. I was wondering how this came across to a first time reader, so your unbiased comment helps immensely. I might create a prologue, as there is a lot of additional backstory to be established anyway. Thanks again.
Thanks! I see what you mean regarding the name introduction. I was wondering how this came across to a first time reader, so your unbiased comment helps immensely. I might create a prologue, as there is a lot of additional backstory to be established anyway. Thanks again.