IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run
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(01-31-2018, 07:46 PM)vagabond Wrote:  hi river, "hineni" is a beautiful word in sound and meaning.. and personally it also reminds me of a leonard cohen song.
i wondered if you could write "nor is it deafness" instead of "blindness" concerning those oracular dreams.
but i want it darker


Wink


also if i remember right that last section i recontextualized into a sort of synthesis of the first and second sections, so it begins as a response to those "two lone lights", and continues into a "foreign tongue", before finally ending in an image of both sound and [brilliant] fury, "fire-/works"

also apparently Duterte is planning to close Boracay? i don't know what to say about that -- i mean, i hated it, it was so busy, but so many people's lives actually depend on that place that i don't think that's a prudent idea
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RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by RiverNotch - 02-11-2018, 11:44 AM



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