Sublime

[yimbus]

The beautiful ones want to take you away
You sink to a dream as the trees all turn gray --> i think this could be worded better...all turn gray didn't flow well for me
You watch as the blue drips down from the skies
The colors are painted on the backs of your eyes
You hold a red apple from a country unknown
Blood melts from its skin as it turns to a stone 

Her dark skin makes you love
The red rose makes you cry
But remember, Sirrah, we’re all gray when we die

Purple cloaks make me king
His black skin makes him mine
But remember, my son, it’s all black when we die

The colors we see are earth’s rhythm and rhyme
And so I sit staring at colors sublime

i liked it a lot. The imagery you created is amazing and the meanings you convey with the colors work well. I think it's a great concept and executed well. Don't have much critique except that the first two lines were a bit awkwardly worded for me. Really enjoy reading it and trying to interpret it