As alive as it needs to be

As alive as it needs to be - Edit 1

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02-03-2018, 09:14 PM

Hi yimbus,

Quote:this part is messy to me, not sure I understand it

Coffee reference.

Quote:The structure is awkward to me in spots. There are a lot of periods and capital letters that I'm not sure if they belong. I would try to limit capital letters to points of emphasis, and the beginning of a sentence.

Have to look into that. Thanks for the review!

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As alive as it needs to be - Edit 1 - by ritwiksadhu33 - 02-02-2018, 04:32 AM

RE: As alive as it needs to be - by yimbus - 02-02-2018, 06:56 AM

RE: As alive as it needs to be - by ritwiksadhu33 - 02-03-2018, 09:14 PM

RE: As alive as it needs to be - by tectak - 02-03-2018, 11:22 PM

RE: As alive as it needs to be - by ritwiksadhu33 - 02-04-2018, 12:41 AM

RE: As alive as it needs to be - by tectak - 02-04-2018, 01:03 AM

RE: As alive as it needs to be - by ritwiksadhu33 - 02-04-2018, 01:12 AM

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