01-30-2018, 08:14 AM
Very effective, your point is put across rather powerfully. This might just be a stylistic thing, but I find "blackberries" to be a relatively weak rhyme, and I'm not sure its meaning comes across well.
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Verdunt - by AttnAttack - 12-30-2017, 08:51 AM
RE: Verdant Verdun - by dukealien - 12-30-2017, 12:32 PM
RE: Verdant Verdun - by AttnAttack - 12-30-2017, 01:28 PM
RE: Verdunt - by vagabond - 12-31-2017, 03:38 AM
RE: Verdunt - by AttnAttack - 12-31-2017, 03:42 AM
RE: Verdunt - by vagabond - 12-31-2017, 04:11 AM
RE: Verdunt - by AttnAttack - 12-31-2017, 04:24 AM
RE: Verdunt - by Leanne - 01-03-2018, 06:56 AM
RE: Verdunt - by AttnAttack - 01-03-2018, 08:55 AM
RE: Verdunt - by Leanne - 01-03-2018, 11:56 AM
RE: Verdunt - by QDeathstar - 01-03-2018, 12:28 PM
RE: Verdunt - by therabbitisme - 01-30-2018, 08:14 AM
RE: Verdunt - by yimbus - 01-30-2018, 12:31 PM
RE: Verdunt - by just mercedes - 01-30-2018, 03:14 PM
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