Edit 7: Reflections in St. Augustine

Edit 7: Reflections in St. Augustine

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01-29-2018, 12:28 AM

Hi ritwiksadhu33,

Thank you for your comments. I didn't like ending the poem on "in" so I made some changes to that final stanza, plus a couple other places.

Best, Alex

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Edit 7: Reflections in St. Augustine - by alonso ramoran - 01-23-2018, 06:45 AM

RE: Romanticism, Abandoned - by nibbed - 01-24-2018, 02:25 AM

RE: Edit 1: Romanticism, Abandoned - by alonso ramoran - 01-24-2018, 12:30 PM

RE: Edit 1: Romanticism, Abandoned - by nibbed - 01-25-2018, 01:55 AM

RE: Edit 1: Romanticism, Abandoned - by ritwiksadhu33 - 01-28-2018, 03:50 PM

RE: Edit 2: Romanticism, Abandoned - by alonso ramoran - 01-29-2018, 12:28 AM

RE: Edit 2: Romanticism, Abandoned - by Knot - 01-29-2018, 03:34 AM

RE: Edit 2: Romanticism, Abandoned - by RiverNotch - 01-29-2018, 10:38 PM

RE: Edit 2: Romanticism, Abandoned - by alonso ramoran - 01-30-2018, 08:19 AM

RE: Edit 4: Old Romantic - by alonso ramoran - 02-02-2018, 02:59 PM

RE: Edit 4: Romanticism, Abandoned - by Rave - 02-09-2018, 12:02 PM

RE: Edit 4: Romanticism, Abandoned - by billy - 02-09-2018, 04:00 PM

RE: Edit 5: For Galleries - by alonso ramoran - 02-11-2018, 04:00 AM

RE: Edit 6: To Display - by alonso ramoran - 02-25-2018, 10:03 AM

RE: Edit 6: To Display - by Knot - 02-26-2018, 12:19 AM

RE: Edit 6: To Display - by Lithe17 - 02-26-2018, 04:58 AM

RE: Edit 7: Reflections in St. Augustine - by alonso ramoran - 02-27-2018, 02:25 AM

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