IISZ 2018 Challenge #5 - The Queen's Dreams
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(01-23-2018, 01:32 AM)Todd Wrote:  You Will Meet Three Stooges
Legends of the Fall.

(01-23-2018, 04:24 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote:  Endless streams             coloring the memory
of fears and desires       thicker, heavier. Catch
loose ends tangling,       and collapse.  Although, 
weaving, unravelling       always disorganized.
Deafening weight            from what you believe
of familial pressure        you yearn the righteous
and the roles laid            lessons to lead, run
down by ancestors.        Away with your needs.
You are the earths          farewell to fascism
eruption to freedom       and dream, come true,
You are the births           complete personification 
corruption, mutation.     Be the change you seek.     
You are amazing,            you can do anything
You are unique.               You can make mistakes
You can be alone            But You know you shouldn't       You shouldn't                   have done that                       
Is the idea to make it readable vertically and horizontally? That would be killer.

I like the ending. Dreams sometimes help us metabolize difficult things that have happened, other times forcing us to relive them fruitlessly.
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RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #5 - The Queen's Dreams - by Lizzie - 01-23-2018, 03:16 PM



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