01-23-2018, 04:17 AM
Similar themes shared by the last three.
Lizzie: One Flesh is a solid title. Good content throughout. Absolutely loved your subtle "missing link"
River: Enjoyed the retelling, good original phrasing to own it and a great last line.
Keith: Didn't see the ending coming, but it held my attention throughout.
Lizzie: One Flesh is a solid title. Good content throughout. Absolutely loved your subtle "missing link"
River: Enjoyed the retelling, good original phrasing to own it and a great last line.
Keith: Didn't see the ending coming, but it held my attention throughout.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson