Garbage Human

[Simplyonicx]

I liked most of this poem but it could be worked on a bit. I understood what it was about. There were some awkward sentences that have been brought out by other people here such as "You who bring me down because if its me, its not you." For thd most part just some sentence errors.t also is very wordy you can cut this down a bit I don't want to tell you how to write your poem