Constellations

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Constellations 

The night above, dark and deep,

constellations bring you a moment of peace. 

The city lights make you dream, 

beyond the boundaries is a life you seek.

Your beautiful mind takes you further away,

to a distant place you can't explain. 

The good, the bad, the sunshine, the rain. 

The future is for you to see, 

you'll have what you want, all that you need.

You're done thinking. Your mind is full.

The dark and deep night above,

there is no sorrow, it's everything you love. 

I liked the imagery that this work evokes.
I thought this worked as the poem is  clear
and is not over complicated with unnecessary
flowery words.

I thought this work used metaphor quite well....

*Your beautiful mind takes you further away,

to a distant place you can't explain. 

The good, the bad, the sunshine, the rain. *

'The sunshine, the rain'. I really liked this part of the poem.
The feeling intended is tangible yet not overstated overwork the piece.