IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run

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IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run

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01-20-2018, 02:33 AM

dark, honest. this has impact.
especially the "poultice"-metaphor around the repeated "nothings" and the bite of sad smiles.

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IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by rayheinrich - 01-19-2018, 02:46 PM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by Todd - 01-20-2018, 01:48 AM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by Lizzie - 01-23-2018, 05:44 AM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by vagabond - 01-20-2018, 02:33 AM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by Todd - 01-20-2018, 02:44 AM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by CRNDLSM - 01-20-2018, 10:30 AM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by nibbed - 01-20-2018, 11:22 AM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by Lizzie - 01-23-2018, 05:56 AM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by nibbed - 01-23-2018, 02:21 PM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by Todd - 01-20-2018, 01:50 PM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by nibbed - 01-21-2018, 02:08 AM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by vagabond - 01-20-2018, 06:04 PM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by dukealien - 01-21-2018, 06:10 AM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by Tiger the Lion - 01-23-2018, 05:50 AM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by Keith - 01-24-2018, 09:01 AM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by RiverNotch - 01-26-2018, 02:46 AM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by Lizzie - 01-29-2018, 02:44 AM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by Todd - 01-29-2018, 02:48 AM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by RiverNotch - 01-29-2018, 11:04 PM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by vagabond - 01-31-2018, 07:46 PM

RE: IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run - by RiverNotch - 02-11-2018, 11:44 AM

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