IISZ 2018 Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run
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Art is not beauty, it is the lie that leads to it.  - Leonora Carrington
   

    Hey!, you people from the future: These Challenges are forever!   Feel free to add something new.
    For links to all the Challenges, just click the P.S. button below:
    Challenge #1 - Cut Up Folktale can be found here.
    Challenge #2 - Death by Words can be found here.
    Challenge #3 - Utterly Mistaken can be found here.
    Challenge #4 - Word Dog Run can be found here.
    Challenge #5 - Queen's Dreams can be found here.
    Challenge #X - Bucket Brigade can be found here.
   

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    The Queen's impressed with us, and informs us it's time for reflection and deep thoughts, time to
    exercise the little gray cells. And what better way to accomplish this than a word dog run? It's a
    run because we're not actually racing anyone. We're word dogs (ok, maybe a cat or two) harnessed
    up as a team; heading out for a brisk, rollicking romp across the hyperborean expanses of Mother
    IIcelandia
. Pulling a mundane sled? Of course not. We're drawing a vehicle that befits our staturesque*
    status: The Queen's well-anointed (hence lardaceously** lubricated), gold-runnered thesaurus-sleigh.
   

    Challenge #4
   
    Guidelines:
   
    1. Have a look at the these four poems written by big-deal famous writers. (But don't let that put
    you off, they're just writers.) The poems start short and they get long. But don't let the short one
    fool you, it's got surprises.
   
    2. After you get a feel for the poems (if you're feeling lazy, you can stick with the short ones), take
    whatever strikes your fancy from any or all of them and freely and liberally cram some aspects
    of one of them, or two, or three, or four into a single stand-alone, separate, and all-together different
    poem (or poems).
   
    3. Use the poems for inspiration, just like you'd use a painting, or a day at the beach, or a pair of
    your old shoes. In other words: use the poems as ekphrastic objects. (Wikipedia article on ekhrasis
    can be found here.)
   
    4. And you don't have to make it complicated. If you want to, you can write about wheelbarrows***.
    (Though the Queen is hoping that you stretch your gray cells a bit more than that.)
   
    5. Use no fewer than 30 words.
   
    and...
   
    6. Feeling prodigiously productive? Feel free, if the fit strikes you, to post as many as you want.
    (Though you might consider pausing for a bit after the tenth of July so you can take part in
      IIce Conspiracy Enterprises' "Hot Shark Soufflé". )
     

    *** Oh, wait, a lot depends on them... well, at least the red ones.
    Those four poems by big-deal famous writers:

    World Breaking Apart - Louise Glück
        World Breaking Apart   -   Louise Glück

I look out over the sterile snow.
Under the white birch tree, a wheelbarrow.
The fence behind it mended. On the picnic table,
mounted snow, like the inverted contents of a bowl
whose dome of the wind shapes. The wind,
with its impulse to build. And under my fingers,
the square white keys, each stamped
with its single character. I believed
a mind's shattering released
the objects of its scrutiny: trees, blue plums in a bowl,
a man reaching for his wife's hand
across a slanted table, and quietly covering it,
as though his will enclosed it in that gesture.
I saw them come apart, the glazed clay
begin dividing endlessly, dispersing
incoherent particles that went on
shining forever. I dreamed of watching that
the way we watched the stars on summer evenings,
my hand on your chest, the wine
holding the chill of the river. There is no such light.
And pain, the free hand, changes almost nothing.
Like the winter wind, it leaves
settled forms in the snow. Known, identifiable —
except there are no uses for them.

    Virgin Mule - Andrei Codrescu
Virgin Mule   -   Andrei Codrescu

The conversations of the French
Quarter mules in their stables
after a full day of pulling
tourists and voters over cobble-
stones is not espresso witty
and in their dark no TVs feed
them news of the ends of mules
elsewhere in the Middle East
and West. In our stables the ends
of others are a fact of atmosphere.
The yoyos on the mystery island
nextdoor are revving familiar tools
in backyard now gripped by failure
first of electricity than of
a meaner something that'll grow
into nothing we'll know in the A.M.
Once they were visitors like us
then they grew mulish in their
bubbles and pulled whatever
was put around their necks in-
cluding a banner that said, About
What Kills Us We Know Little.
On certain nights after a good
internal fight we hear the voice-
less others through the glass
fearfully sweet'n'soft like dough.
Oh let the monsters in. Help us
rise above our not seeing them,
may they let us into their eyes
as well. Banish the blindness
of these cobblestones, clop, clop.
But! Pffsst! Our notes are in-
complete. Loving you was
never on the agenda. Better
to sing as roughly as the stones.
On Memorial Day we had one
thousand hotdogs & counting.
Didn't visit a single graveyard.
We the Grant Wood folks scan
the sky for incoming missiles:
blips ourselves we understand
timing and touring in America.
The gilded dads in the portraits
sought the idealized continuity
now moving before us democratically
in showers of pixels and dots.
I'll go with the distracted mariner,
my lover, and we'll be in the world.
It will be late by then and dark.
We lyric virgin mules keep our
book of hours in a dream apart,
having stranded a billion turistas.
But we could not break the chummy hand.
Ready to brave the snow without a hat,
severe weather notwithstanding,
we merely nod and understand.

    Power, The Enchanted World - George Oppen
Power, The Enchanted World   -   George Oppen

1
Streets, in a poor district -

Crowded,
We mean the rooms

Crowded, they come to stand
In vacant streets

Streets vacant of power

Therefore the irrational roots

We are concerned with the given

2
…That come before the swallow dares…

The winds of March

Black winds, the gritty winds, mere squalls and rags

There is  a force we disregarded and which disregarded us

I'd wanted friends
Who talked of a public justice

Very simple people
I forget what we said

3
Now we do most of the killing
Having found a logic

Which is control
Of the world, 'we'
And Russia

What does it mean to object
Since it will happen?
It is possible, therefore it will happen
And the dead, this time, dead

4
Power, which hides what it can

But within sight of the river

On a wall near a corner marked by the Marylyn Shoppe
And a branch bank

I saw scrawled in chalk the words, Put your hand on your
          heart

And elsewhere, in another hand,

Little Baby Ass

And it is those who find themselves in love with the world
Who suffer an anguish of mortality

5
Power ruptures at a thousand holes
Leaking the ancient air in,

The paraphernalia of a culture
On the gantries
 
And the grease of the engine itself
At the extremes of reality

Which is not what we wanted

The heart uselessly opens
To 3 words, which is too little

    North American Time - Adrienne Rich
For Adrienne Rich reading 'North American Time' (7min 44 sec) on YouTube click here.

North American Time   -   Adrienne Rich

I
When my dreams showed signs
of becoming
politically correct
no unruly images
escaping beyond borders
when walking in the street I found my
themes cut out for me
knew what I would not report
for fear of enemies' usage,
then I began to wonder

II
Everything we write
will be used against us
or against those we love.
These are the terms,
take them or leave them.
Poetry never stood a chance
of standing outside history.
One line typed twenty years ago
can be blazed on a wall in spraypaint
to glorify art as detachment
or torture of those we
did not love but also
did not want to kill
We move but our words stand
become responsible
for more than we intended,
and this is verbal privilege

III
Try sitting at a typewriter
one calm summer evening
at a table by a window
in the country, try pretending
your time does not exist
that you are simply you
that the imagination simply strays
like a great moth, unintentional
try telling yourself
you are not accountable
to the life of your tribe
the breath of your planet

IV
It doesn't matter what you think.
Words are found responsible
all you can do is choose them
or choose
to remain silent. Or, you never had a choice,
which is why the words that do stand
are responsible
and this is verbal privilege

V
Suppose you want to write
of a woman braiding
another woman's hair—
straight down, or with beads and shells
in three-strand plaits or corn-rows—
you had better know the thickness
the length, the pattern
why she decides to braid her hair
how it is done to her
what country it happens in
what else happens in that country
You have to know these things

VI
Poet, sister: words—
whether we like it or not—
stand in a time of their own.
no use protesting I wrote that
before Kollontai was exiled
Rosa Luxembourg, Malcolm,
Anna Mae Aquash, murdered,
before Treblinka, Birkenau,
Hiroshima, before Sharpeville,
Biafra, Bangla Desh, Boston,
Atlanta, Soweto, Beirut, Assam
—those faces, names of places
sheared from the almanac
of North American time

VII
I am thinking this in a country
where words are stolen out of mouths
as bread is stolen out of mouths
where poets don't go to jail
for being poets, but for being
dark-skinned, female, poor.
I am writing this in a time
when anything we write
can be used against those we love
where the context is never given
though we try to explain, over and over.
For the sake of poetry at least
I need to know these things

VIII
Sometimes, gliding at night
in a plane over New York City
I have felt like some messenger
called to enter, called to engage
this field of light and darkness.
A grandiose idea, born of flying.
But underneath the grandiose idea
is the thought that what I must engage
after the plane has raged onto the tarmac
after climbing my old stairs, sitting down
at my old window
is meant to break my heart
and reduce me to silence.

IX
In North America time stumbles on
without moving, only releasing
a certain North American pain.
Julia de Burgos wrote:
"That my grandfather was a slave
is my grief; had he been a master
that would have been my shame."

A poet's words, hung over a door
in North America, in the year
nineteen-eighty-three.
The almost-full moon rises
timelessly speaking of change
out of the Bronx, the Harlem River
the drowned towns of the Quabbin
the pilfered burial mounds
the toxic swamps, the testing-grounds
and I start to speak again.



    Future Challenges, Dates and Timing:
        Challenges will be posted slightly before 6am GMT which is 1am in New York City,
        6am in London, 2pm in Manila, 5pm in Sydney, and 7pm in Auckland.

        There will be 4 more challenges. The next (5th) challenge will be posted Monday Jan 22.
        And the rest will follow, one every 3 days:  Jan 25, 28, and 31.
   

    * Root word is "stature", not "statue". Though, come to think of it, we're that too.
    ** "lardaceously" Ha! Cool word. Just learned it today and had to try it out.


        IISZ Team:
            rayheinrich: Head Chief Executive Head ( HCEH )
            lizzie: Senior Executive Vice President for Creativity and Chaos ( VPCC )
            quixilated: Executive Vice President for Narratives and Perplexity ( VPNP )
            vagabond: Executive Vice President for Quonundra and Qwertyness ( VPQQ )
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