01-15-2018, 01:42 PM
(01-15-2018, 06:56 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: And it Came with Roses!Minor point because I do like this. Usually, kittens are the ones to be drowned (thank you, Grandpa, for burning this into my childhood memories). Though any atrocity is possible I guess. I just think this might benefit from flipping the animal references.
Sweetheart,
you stood there for an eternity
brushing your teeth
at the bathroom sink
your awesome little bum
wigglin' in those kooky bunny pajamas
without a worry in the world
approaching the day like a daredevil
while I sat self-loathing
at the end of the bed
in a karmic paralysis
of shame
about the night before
how I'd turned
my guilt into your grief
how your infinite coolheadedness
mocked my savage crazy
how your sacred tears
left me a wounded kitten
too weak to be tortured
a puppy
asking not to be drowned
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
