01-13-2018, 02:15 PM
Hey Keith,
Thanks for your feedback. I did think I added--at the least--a hint as to what the house meant to the N in lines 15-18, but as you said, I was going for the more bittersweet feeling of taking one last good look at a house you used to call home.
Best, Alex
Thanks for your feedback. I did think I added--at the least--a hint as to what the house meant to the N in lines 15-18, but as you said, I was going for the more bittersweet feeling of taking one last good look at a house you used to call home.
Best, Alex