01-13-2018, 10:18 AM
Hello Alexorande,
I really enjoy this piece and the ability it has to take the reader somewhere personal to them, it isn't too specific. The metaphors you use are very well worded and clever, I really appreciate the thought you put into them. My only critique is I would love to know how personal this piece means to you as the writer.
-Jerianne
I really enjoy this piece and the ability it has to take the reader somewhere personal to them, it isn't too specific. The metaphors you use are very well worded and clever, I really appreciate the thought you put into them. My only critique is I would love to know how personal this piece means to you as the writer.
-Jerianne