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First Edit: Late Night Blues

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01-11-2018, 08:48 AM

Hey ellajam,
Thanks for the feedback. You addressed a lot of the areas I was unsure about. The break between stanza three and four was probably the biggest thing I was curious about in terms of effectiveness, so I appreciate your thoughts on that.

Thanks again,
Richard

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First Edit: Late Night Blues - by Richard - 01-10-2018, 12:24 PM

RE: Late Night Blues - by ellajam - 01-10-2018, 11:03 PM

RE: Late Night Blues - by Richard - 01-11-2018, 08:48 AM

RE: Late Night Blues - by Knot - 01-13-2018, 10:57 PM

RE: Late Night Blues - by Richard - 01-14-2018, 01:26 AM

RE: Late Night Blues - by Rave - 02-09-2018, 09:40 PM

RE: Late Night Blues - by tectak - 02-12-2018, 12:17 AM

RE: Late Night Blues - by Richard - 02-09-2018, 10:21 PM

RE: Late Night Blues - by nibbed - 02-13-2018, 02:40 AM

RE: Late Night Blues - by ritwiksadhu33 - 02-13-2018, 03:06 AM

RE: Late Night Blues - by Richard - 02-14-2018, 10:35 PM

RE: Late Night Blues - by Writerbyfire - 02-17-2018, 06:44 AM

RE: Late Night Blues - by Richard - 02-17-2018, 11:01 AM

RE: First Edit: Late Night Blues - by Richard - 02-18-2018, 05:20 AM

RE: First Edit: Late Night Blues - by Writerbyfire - 02-18-2018, 09:48 AM

RE: First Edit: Late Night Blues - by Richard - 02-18-2018, 10:13 AM

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