Musical Chairs
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Nice video and choices you made in the delivery.

I also like the general metaphor.

The metaphor could probably be repurposed and developed in another poem. I think it would be hard to separate this current one from the pictures and live delivery.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Musical Chairs - by Kaily Bear - 01-09-2018, 04:04 PM
RE: Musical Chairs - by Leanne - 01-09-2018, 04:15 PM
RE: Musical Chairs - by Todd - 01-10-2018, 01:45 AM



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